"What's your progress?" asked my professor with regard to the summer research that I'm supposed to conduct in return of the money I get paid.
Note: This post maybe likable to those who liked the "On Writing" post about Stephen King previously published in this very blog.
[SO FIRST OFF, ALWAYS BEGIN YOUR STORY WITH A PITIABLE CHARACTER IN A SAD-SAD CONDITION. SO THAT PPL CAN RELATE TO IT.]
While midway through the dumbbell raise, his gaze drifted to a blond girl that recently came and stood next to him. In her skimpy clothes and long curly hair, she flashed her eyes in a quick glance followed by a friendly smile.
[ADD ROMANCE. OF COURSE.]
He continued to stare at her beyond the four second rule of staring at pretty girls (which he often broke). But the girl's eyes did not met his anymore. Her eyes were fixed 0n something else.
[MYSTERY? HOW CAN WE FORGET TO ADD SUSPENSE!]
She followed the line of her vision beyond him, towards the dumbbell rack.
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